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I see you from afar
I wonder who you are
I watch for a minute
Seeing it doesn't fit
Thinking it would never work
Then i see your clever smirk
You walk over and say hi
All I can think is to say hi
Nothing escapes my silent tongue
And I think of Master Fung
I watch you as you speak
Wishing I wasn't so meek
I finally ask your name
And you sak me the same
We exchange names and numbers
And I have a peacful slumber
I see you again the next day
And again I don't know what to say
You see me walking towards you
And you automatically remember who
You ask me about how I slept
And I tell you of the bear I kept
You laugh as I blush
And wait for you to shush
You stop and say "That's cute."
I look away feeling quite mute
"It's not something I'd guess."
Then I remember my hair is a mess
The bell's about to ring for class
And you disappear into the mass
I spend the rest of the day alone
And act more like a stone
You meet me beside my bus
As some other students begin to fuss
You yell at them and they get scared
And until then I hadn't known you cared
You ride home with us
Thinking the driver would cause a fuss
We arrive at my stop first
And head to my house to quench our thirst
As we finish off the drinks
I begin to fill the sink
We talk for the rest of the day
Until you know you cannot stay
I wait for you tomorrow
not knowing if you'd show
As I begin to think you'd moved away
I quickly learn you're here to stay
This is just another random poem but this time it's a lil more romantic -wink wink-
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Nastaciakaye Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
school crush...
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pagan-skater Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
confusing
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Tammots23 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This one is amasing ^^
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
ty
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:icontammots23:
Tammots23 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
-smiles-
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
if i was single id ask u out
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:icontammots23:
Tammots23 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha ^^ wow i feel special ^^
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
:D
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Tammots23 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, you were serious werent you?

:meow:
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
about the title yes
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christineyuki Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Student Writer
i like it :P
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
im glad u do
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:iconnourasiadragon:
nourasiadragon Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
Aww I like it. :D
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
ty
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:iconnourasiadragon:
nourasiadragon Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
yw :)
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smorz-love Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
this is great!
i think ur just gettign better and better!
i took the narrarrator as a girl
i hope thats right
b/c she slept with a bear
and her hair was a mess.
so that made sense to me.
but i was just wondering
if it was from a guys or girls perspective.
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
well actually... rereading it myself, i guess either could work, though i wrote it thinking about what a guy would say to a girl
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smorz-love Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
well from a guys perspective
u can se that hes kinda shy
and self confiednt
again this is great James.
im so impressed.
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2009
lol thanks
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a-broken-soul Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
This is cute.

I love how you've made it tell a story. The ending is also indicative of your title, there's a feeling that it goes on, even though the words have ended. It's wonderful that you can tie in your title in such a way! ^^
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pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
ty im glad u like it
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StarRacerEva Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its very cute I like it
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
ty babe
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StarRacerEva Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-smiles- np
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:iconpagan-skater:
pagan-skater Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
-kisses u-
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:iconstarracereva:
StarRacerEva Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-kisses u bk-
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